Quiet Poetry Lounge : my turn

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Jul 27, 2011.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    come lay your trust down inside my heart
    for i have cleaned house and made it your love's safe haven
    from this moment on i will only touch you with a feather of care
    feed your mind with sexy desire from my private stash
    wash your body in the pure water cascading from my soul
    see your love has transformed me and now i am pure energy
    coming to surround the whole of you with my points of light
    coming in a bolt of lightning to electrify your body from head to toe
    changing to an asteroid falling to your earth making it my home
    flying like a falcon with my great wingspan navigating to your air
    gracing the lake as a swan carrying my love in my soft down to deliver to you
    growing into a moon flower you can hold in your dreams while you sleep
    pursing my lips into moonlight kissing you everywhere while you lay
    you are so divine in your blessed and beautiful manness,
    let my femininity rise and shine in your peaceful foreverness







     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love how this was layed out
     
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    Jill Scott is able to fuse poetry, sensuality and soul into grooves such as "Crown Royal" and "Until then". She sings with a passion and desire that is stimulating at the core. Her delivery has a effortless strength that resonates and makes the lyrics tangible.

    What does this poem have to do with Jill Scott...nothing

    ...but as I read it for the 3rd time I couldn't help but wonder who better to sing the sonnets and communicate the crescendo of the intimate and passionate connection between the subject of this scribe and the object of her affection than Jill Scott.

    I enjoyed this poem...as usual
     
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    Love that you love how this was layed out. (kiss)
     
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    Brother Poet NittyGrit,

    Seriously...you are always up in my head. I write to music and Jill...well she's my girl. Thank you for this. It made me smile. I always appreciate your comments.
     
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    I've been gone from here a long time...and somehow I knew it was time to come back and immerse myself in the flow of the gifted. Poetess, I intend to drown myself in your words! You are truly gifted, and your lyrical command of the language is fierce! I am, indeed, baptized again.... amen!
     
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    Sister Poet alyce,

    Goodness! What in the world am I to reply to this comment? (smile) I have to tell you I am tickled and more so because you're a sister poet. Giving you a hug, alyce. Thank you so much! I'm glad you're back, can't wait to read you. (smile)
     
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