Black Poetry : My true love story.....

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  1. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I met u in my neighborhood.... I was only 12
    U were 14
    and it seemed like since then
    no one has ever been able to
    make me feel the way that you do
    even though we had our difficult times
    the love always remained true
    When u were incarcerated I stood by your side
    cause I loved u more than anything in life
    and u promised me the world
    but when u came home
    promises faded and so did our relationship.
    But after a while we became friends
    cause we still had sooo much love
    for each other and to be apart
    was nothing but pain...
    But then our friendship turned sour & slowly
    came to a hault
    and we found ourselves not speaking again....

    We would see each other on the street
    and hug and embrace
    and our friends around us
    could see the hurt on our face
    but still we were too scared to
    admit
    that we couldn't breathe without
    each other
    but still... that was it...
    And u got locked down again
    cause u turned to a life of crime
    And u ran back to me like last time
    But instead of me helping u do your time
    with ease,
    I left u in there all alone
    cause I couldn't believe
    all those promises that I fell for the last time.
    But this time u were sincere calling me everyday
    writing letters and drawing me things
    even getting your mother to call
    and talk to me 4 times a week...
    But still something inside had me running away
    I couldn't figure out why but I continued to stay away...
    Then a long time had passed
    and you finally got out
    and called me
    and in my heart I screamed and shout
    cause my baby was finally home....
    I thought u came home to me
    but you broke the news gently
    and told me u were getting married....
    And I must admit
    it felt like I had been stabbed
    and kicked and bitten.....
    and I tore up every drawing and every letter
    you had written...
    And I cried alot of days cause I knew
    that if I hadn't abandoned u in jail
    I would be the one marrying u

    And here it is one year later
    I hadn't heard a word from you
    and u called me last nigt
    and my sister gave me the news
    And I must admit I was so happy to have
    found out that u called.... sooo happy

    U left your number for me to holla
    and I was pretty nervous but you know I had to call...
    And we talked last night and it was the best
    convo we ever had...
    But we always could talk to each other about anything
    but I was so glad.... that love was still there
    And u told me that it didn't work out with u and your wife
    and u had gotten a divorce
    and I jumped up and my heart took flight
    and u told me that u have never loved someone the way u loved me
    and I told u that I 'll love u eternally...
    We talked all night and did alot of catching up
    and it was so nice to talk to you again... my baby
    my first love
    my best friend
    my everything
    still is and was back then

    3:00 in the morning came and we had to get some sleep

    you told me I love you
    and I said I love u more
    and we parted with a phone kiss..
    and I look forward to seeing u soon
    and start this love off right
    and this time I'll never let u go....

    This poem is dedicated 2 the man I have loved and will always love... Slim... u are my heart ... I MISSED U AND I LOVE U....
    From DIIMOND
    :love: :heart: :love: :heart: :love: :heart: :love: :heart: :love: :love: :love:



    Well Today is October 19th and let me tell u how this ended..
    He is back to selling and hustlin on da streets..
    Looks like we weren't meant 2 be...
    I had to update this poem
    cause happily ever after is not in the plans...
    So we are not together
    cause I can't go thru the jail issue again.
    I refuse to help someone that doesn't wanna be helped.
    I will pray for him that He makes Jesus His Savior.
    But as of today I AM MOVING ON!!!
    Slim... I will always love you...
    you were my fisrt love
    but like Tina said
    WHAT"S LOVE GOT TO DO WITH IT...
    Peace out family
     
  2. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i just ahve to thro in a...awwwwww...****..i love that story!!!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmm!!! love & be loved
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a true love story....you could almost feel your pain when reading it...
    I'm so glad it ended the way it did...

    beautiful.....

    K
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you know love ain't a bad thing
    and things happened for a reason some times

    yo feeling your story

    DSS
     
  6. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much fam for feeling my flow
    I didn't expect to ever hear from him again
    It sure was the greatest gift I could've been given....
    Thank you guys for allowing me to share my heart
    and soul with you all...
    Much love and thank you LiLi, $RICH$,Kitana, and
    Da Street So'ja...
    1Love......
     
  7. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmmmm.....

    Diimond, you are too deep for me, Sista Poetess. You really let the waterfall plunge wit dis peace. Congratulations and best wishes with this true love.
     
  8. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwww...... Thank you for the love Nia and God bless u....
    Girl u are a true poetess yourself....
    Thanks a million Nia Maishani!!!
    1 Love Fam....
     
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