Black Poetry : My Touch

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Nov 30, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your desire called out to me in hushed tones
    Begging for the chance to be filled with all of
    me and then some more until we were...complete

    I answered knowingly in anticipation that my
    firm touch would reveal itself with charming
    ecstasy; enjoyed only by your desire's need in me

    Slowly...rhythmically, I touched you as if my life
    line pulsated with your own; you soothed my inner
    senses as I warmed your aching want for my embrace

    Special moments reserved just for touching long and
    meaningful; a loving and deeply kept feeling took over
    I burned inside just to trace your thoughts with a tender
    stroke placed comfortably there...about your person

    With eyes closed, a delectable chill escaped me as I
    touched you with my mind's fingertips--surely a sign
    of things to come when the touch turns sensually real
    Gently your essence sung in harmony with my passion

    As I wrapped my arms around you, I absorbed the fiery feel
    of knowing my heart had been captured within your eternity
    It was then that I felt my own exclusive touch; reflecting...

    I quietly smiled...

    (C)GQInc 2001
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Q! It's been a while brutha...

    Dog This **** is explosive! Im feelin you hea

    "Your desire called out to me in hushed tones
    Begging for the chance to be filled with all of
    me and then some more until we were...complete"

    and this...

    "knowing my heart had been captured within your eternity"

    You in the zone dog! Been missin ya scribes... this hea is motivation to me.

    Let it Marinate
    Reas
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm GQ

    "As I wrapped my arms around you, I absorbed the fiery feel
    of knowing my heart had been captured within your eternity
    It was then that I felt my own exclusive touch; reflecting...

    I quietly smiled... "


    I too have missed your passion pen. This is lip smackin good. I felt my own exclusive touch as I read this a second and third time.



    One
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reason...

    Fella, this war has a brotha humping and not much time for poetical synergy...

    Got a "moment of poetical clarity" and snuck in to post this...:cool:

    Thanks for the read bro!!!

    Peace/
    GQ
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zorb!

    I'm always immersed in your "Ubzorbshun" no matter how long I'm away...

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  6. poeticdelight

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    O MY GOODNESS

    what is going on? :lol:

    your flow has become top-notch

    like whoa :eek:

    keep hitten us with the flavor GQ

    pd :)
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes....

    This speaks textures, hues, volumes....to my situation....
    Got a case of virtigo, too....


    thank ya!

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey Q master

    wow! man u came tyght like top flyght
    hittin' it just right .......ya alwayz bring
    it smooveee!!!!!:eek:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    GQ

    nice piece dunn
    you write so that
    a brotha could
    appreciate it


    peace

    DSSNY
     
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