Black Poetry : MY TIME

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by katishia, Jun 10, 2004.

  1. katishia

    katishia Member MEMBER

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    I'M LOSING MY MIND, IN A MINUTE GONNA GRAB MY NINE. WANNA TEST MY PATIENCE. I HAVE NOTHING BUT TIME, MY MIND IS WONDERING AND MY HEART IS POUNDING, WATCH MY BACK THINKING WILL I BE NEXT, ****** MAKE YOU ACT LIKE THAT. THE **** I'VE DONE I KNOW WAS WRONG AND THAT SAME **** IS GOING TO FOLLOW ME HOME. NOW I'M LAYING HERE IN A POOL OF BLOOD, ASKING GOD TO SHOW ME SOME LUV. NOW I LAY ME DOWN TO SLEEP, HEAVEN OR HELL I DESERVE WHAT EVER BECOMES OF ME. SOCIETY I BLAME FOR THE BEAST IN ME. MY ONLY PRAYER IS THAT YOU DON'T RAISE ANOTHER LIKE ME.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up bruh one of a kind indeed
    dis was awesome tyte drop on the beat
    happy to feel ya flow
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If it was in you to say what you did, then it's in you to change...
    what a bang you came in with, welcome and keep the curve on that pen.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so raw and full of realness...
    man...it jerked me so quick into the mind
    and deeply in between the lines of the experience
    if this is real for you...I affirm Sister Queentswana...
    and if not...I know, this story belongs to someone...
    your writing is incredible...know that