Black Poetry : My Thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by brasco901, Dec 18, 2002.

  1. brasco901

    brasco901 New Member MEMBER

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    This is my first post here. This is something that I wrote for someone special......just because! She knows who she is.

    My Thoughts
    With your eyes closed tight and your mind open and clear....
    I invite you to hold out your hand and follow me.
    This is not an adventure or journey and not even a brief tour.
    I just want to quickly take you to a place where nothing else matters.
    A place where you have time to be free of all responsibilities.
    I'm leading you to a place that only you and I can share.
    Once there, we could talk about everything and confide only in one another.
    I would tell you about how I have haunting dreams of being with only you.
    You would see me crossing oceans just to have one glimpse of you.
    You would see me building upon all that I have so that I could provide for you,
    You would see yourself being put before anything else.
    You would see yourself as I see you......intelligent, intriguing, simply gorgeous and breath taking.
    That is what I see through my eyes.
    You would know how certain sweet smells invoke every sensual memory that I have of you.
    You woulld even see the first time that our lips ever touched and how I nearly lost my breath thinking 'THIS CAN'T BE REAL'.
    You would see that all I have is yours, all I needed was you and all that you have to give.......I accept unconditionally.
    If you think about the place that I have invited you into......
    It's simply within me. This place is MY THOUGHTS.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Hmmmmm...let me see. Who can it be? j/k

    I just got here...I know very few folks on here. lol

    Nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome as u flow working da vibe to let her know
    welcome to da playground of destee's place
    welcome poet upon family & friendz see u be kin
    come right in do as u do she feel ya vibe that u scribe
    welcome in !:D :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dope piece

    one luv
     
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    I like I like
    Flow on!!!
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is peace right here mannn

    nfinite,
    jh...
     
  7. brasco901

    brasco901 New Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the positive feedback. I'll be posting more some time soon. Merry Christmas to all.
     
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    Godfather Active Member MEMBER

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    This is phat. Plain n simply put.

    Peace
    Godfather
     
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