Black Poetry : my thinkin' chair

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again I'm home alone on my porcelain thrown,
    contemplating all the thoughts that be clouding my dome,
    my mind roams quite sporadically,
    decipher matters oh so masterfully,
    but inadequately equipt to deal with this false reality.
    So I only deal with actuality and the truly tangible,
    and attack my inner demons like unruly animals.
    Then I channel my flows from concepts to creation,
    it's amazing that inspiration could come from constipation.
    The same concentration used to expel excrement,
    is the same amount of intensity I use to pen my sentiments
    on this spiral pad, when I'll lounging in the lab.
    Or laboratory, another day another story,
    the ideals that I jot are just merely exploratory.
    But alas they give me glory and always fill a mental void,
    yet there's always been a mystery that makes me oh so paranoid.
    When I sit I'm fully clothed with my pants around the ankle,
    but somehow unconsciously my garments never seem to be
    as they were when I took my pen and pad up off the mantle.
    By the end of my visit and after I've handled the specifics,
    I sit atop my thrown as bare as the paper was before I scripted it so exquisite.
    I can't remember ever taking off my clothes
    but my theory is, I have to feel physically free to let my thoughts flow
    to accurately convey the ideas in free verse that I compose.
    Who knows,
    that's just my ideology not based on real psychology,
    but makes **** good sense to me.
    So I'll continue to drop these lines from my white tiled place with care,
    until I find another home to replace my thinking chair.



    Copyright 2005
    © Ramarla D. Rozier
    Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    no place like home in the moment of tyme
    i see ya rockin in that chair tyte flow poet !!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that's a twist. Tightly written, poet.
     
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    Your thinking chair seems to work quite well for you, Know that ...you can go from home to home, but your thinking chair...will forever be near.
    for without it, ...constipation ...slowly but surely...will stiffle your "dome"...to a poetic death.
    your writting always leave me in awe, thanks poet, for the flush.
     
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    ok...i thought i was the only one that did that...lol
    smooth flow son...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with the poets before me, this was a clever piece poet. Hey, whatever works, and this scribe works oh so well. Tight piece.
     
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    ...lol, what an inspiration

    Poet...

    Your style is so down with me...

    :bowdown:
     
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    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm amzazed...ur thinking chair...........unique i must say!
     
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    Back to the Lab

    Professor Tzevi, you a mad, "badd" scientist bro.

    Back to the Lab :terrific:
     
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