Black Poetry : ...My Testimony...My Prayer...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as my fingers touch this pen i begin to quake
    cuz its been such a long while that i feel kinda late
    and the emptiness inside my soul curves in my mind
    that all i can think of to do is sit down and cry
    my fingers haven't wrote some words in so [email protected] long
    hiding behind the mask of sex poems and love songs
    but my true testimony makes me feel so shaky
    i don't even know if your gonna let me make it
    Lord, life hasn't been treating to sweet and well
    i've been cast in and upon cancer's black spell
    but so far i've come out gracious and risen
    givin' you the glory that you have arisen
    almost lost my life, but that's not even my trouble
    almost lost my true love in death's ugly struggle
    we were tested so many, many numerous times
    and now all i can do is sit back and recognize
    that every trial i'm faced with eventually makes me stronger
    i think that's why you let me stay here a 'lil while longer
    Lord i cherish you, all that you are, and who i am
    so i just pray the next tribulations are ready for your cherished hand....
     
  2. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    AWW THIS WAS DEEPA THAN MUTHA

    i truly felt this one!!!!

    i know how that feels, having a true testimony.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankyou so much:)
     
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    Wow, it's just awesome the way you just penned those raw feelings down. God makes a way out of no way, I was thinking this same thing so strongly today. So nice to hear from you.
     
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    wow..wonderful flow sister lovely...
    much love :)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Sister...
    To God be the Glory...
    for all his wonderful works
    unto you...love the sincerity
    or praise lifted unto him in this piece
    Nice to read you again sister!
    Always in my prayers!
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for your comments everybody:)
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This makes for good reading and reflecting
    The touch of God is AWEsome
    Only those touched know it
    Something about feeling Him when you feel you're in Hell
    Nothing like it!!!!!

    Enjoyed this so much I mean so much!!!!!!

    Peace and love
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww thankyou so much...
     
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    So very nice to see a piece by you on the page, sister. Please don't worry about being shaky in your work or whatever else. Just flow from your heart. I love reading everything you write, and I'm so glad you're doing aiight. Much love girl, you're in my prayers.
     
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