Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Temptress

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A simple flow, some spare of the moment type writing....

    I look at you
    You look at me
    We build a form of intimacy
    With our lovely
    Visions of lovemaking and creating
    Playing with my spirit
    Knowing that i am relating
    Your eyes are full of fire
    And I truly desire
    You.

    You, a beautiful queen
    Held high upon the throne
    One whose never in her life known
    The denotation of alone.
    She means everything to me
    She has me in captivity
    And I am slowly, slowly
    Sinking into her soul.
    She is gentle and caring
    Yet striking and bold.

    So as I hold her in my arms
    And slowly but surely she grasps me
    with her charms
    and she has me
    completely
    now she has become me
    and i climax until
    the end of eternity
    she is my happiness
    and everything around me
    she gracefully turns into something
    thats happy.

    A love like this is simply unretainable
    She is unmissable and irresistable
    She slows down my speech.
    She is my source of inspiration
    Yet she teaches me the holy
    see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil methodology
    She is unique
    Indeed u will find no other
    Cause inside my heart
    I place no one above her...

    Racking my brain for words... :huh: ...but, alas, they fail me! :hammer:
     
  2. precisewisdom

    precisewisdom Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful!
    Keep scribing poet!
     
  3. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi, :wave:

    This is a wonderfully expressed piece!!

    Thanks for sharing this one!!

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovely flow keep da ink dripping
     
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    nice flow play..very nice
     
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    emprezz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel

    all warm inside...from this!

    Thanx for sharing!!

    :kiss:
     
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