Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Tears Flowed onto Paper

watzinaname

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My tears flowed onto paper
as I thought of you, the dam burst
and all the feelings came streaming out
raw thoughts that haven't been rehearsed
Naked am I, thoughts laying unclothed
bare, face wet with so much care
it exists, baby, it's unbelievably real
perhaps even stronger than it's ever been, there
in the pit of my being, feelings that are exploding
outwardly as I weep, not out of sadness
but out of the sheer emotion that I am longing
to express, beyond bliss, beyond gladness
My spirit cries out to you
hear me, feel me
as the emotions are soul deep
I am ravaged by them internally
If you look closely
You can truly see
My tears flowed onto paper.....
 
I'm not sure how to even begin to respond to this
An emotion that hits your soul like a tidal wave
washing away everything in its path...forcing one
to see it, become one with it, hear its cry for completion
although...it's in the form of poetry, this is not poetry
it's not just words...it's the beat of a heart, the stirring
elements of a soul

~ A bare expression flailing in the wind
for its lover...to see and follow it home.


mmmmmmmmm....Girl, this one was like lightning striking in the soul! Whoa...
u got me on this one
Sage​
 
watzinaname said:
My tears flowed onto paper
as I thought of you, the dam burst
and all the feelings came streaming out
raw thoughts that haven't been rehearsed
Naked am I, thoughts laying unclothed
bare, face wet with so much care
it exists, baby, it's unbelievably real
perhaps even stronger than it's ever been, there
in the pit of my being, feelings that are exploding
outwardly as I weep, not out of sadness
but out of the sheer emotion that I am longing
to express, beyond bliss, beyond gladness
My spirit cries out to you
hear me, feel me
as the emotions are soul deep
I am ravaged by them internally
If you look closely
You can truly see
My tears flowed onto paper.....


If you look closely
You can truly see
My tears flowed onto paper


This piece is so deep, one need not look close to see, hear or feel you to the core of it all. I can relate to this feeling and I love the way it bursted from within...beautiful piece.
 

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