Black Poetry : My Symphony

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  1. csojourner

    csojourner Member MEMBER

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    My Symphony

    My alarm awakens my depression. I turn to avoid the day, one I seem to be living over and over. The familiar tune of sorrow crows from the black box, however her pitch tells me today will be worse then yesterday so I hit the snooze button and slink back into bed in hopes of a 15 minute reprieve.
    Fifteen minutes passes and no reprieve is granted so sorrow sings again. Yesterday sorrow sang a solo the day before that a duet with loneliness. Today she is accompanied by a symphony of altos playing loneliness, sopranos playing despair, baritones playing brokenness, and the bass playing regrets. All under the direction of a wand less conductor know as me.
    My alarm awakens my depression. I turn to avoid the day, one I seem to be living over and over.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amazing imagery!!!!!!!I love the opportunity for people to challenge my mind and you have hit the mark. I got off to a bad start with you but that what happens when you prejudge someone or something, you're pieces are remarkable and I hope you stay around.
     
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    sometime i wish the alarm didn't go off ......let me sleep inside my slumber
    of peace.
     
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