Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Sweet Valentine

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  1. Slendah

    Slendah Member MEMBER

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    Sorry for posting this one a day late, but yesterday I was too busy celebrating my Valentines Day Birthday with my loving husband, MrRon. :kiss2:

    Let me fix you a bubble bath
    with scented candles around the tub,
    don't worry about places you can't reach
    I'll climb in and lovingly scrub.

    When we're done bathing each other
    follow the rose pedals on the floor,
    you'll see I've arranged them in a path
    leading straight to the bedroom door.

    As we make love to each other
    your lips tenderly touching mine,
    I'll wish I could stay here forever
    in the arms of my sweet valentine.

    Next morning as you awaken
    romantic music will fill your head,
    I'm in the kitchen making breakfast
    which I plan to serve you in bed.

    After eating, I'll wash dishes
    scrubbing each pot down to the shine,
    I gladly do all this for you dear
    Because you're my sweet valentine.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhh!!! yes laced wit roses
     
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    such a beatiful write sis!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just as it should be, no time to jot it all down the evening of... What an endearing scribe about a loving relationship.
     
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    awww... look forward to having one of these days when that time is marked in time for me someday... this was lovely...

    blessings.

    Desert Storm
     
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    uppin this one back in time for V-Day
     
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