Black Poetry : My Summer Breeze

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You touch me with your magic
    Keeping me on my toes
    Our love sticks together like static
    Your love is the only one I know
    The way your juices flow
    And taste
    Puts a big smile on my face
    I know I could never
    Let one drop go to waste
    I need your companionship.
    You are beautiful
    As sweet as a kiss on the cheek
    You are unique
    Truly one of a kind
    You know how to freak me,
    Spiritually, physically
    and especially mentally
    You are a part of me
    Which I cannot live without
    You have become
    All that I think about,
    For your beauty makes
    The things I have seen
    Nothing.
    The Gulf Coast, the Carribean, and the Japanese Sea
    are a few of the things
    that is insulting
    to your beauty
    For you radiate
    good luck, good joy, and other good things.
    I love when you talk to me
    Like Amerie
    What I would do without you
    is truly a mystery.

    (OPEN FOR A CONTINUUM!!! IF YOU FEEL THE INSPIRATION THEN JUMP ON DA FLOW!!!)
     
  2. Lahana Mysteria

    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Swept up in a breeze...I know the feeling :)
     
  3. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u said a continuum? i'll add on then.


    like chocolate in my pocket,
    u melt in my mouth.
    u cleanse me from my infirmities,
    like the fighting power of shout.
    u make me feel like i walk on clouds,
    as angels tell me hi.
    u tell me i am what u want,
    and i dare not question why.
    bcuz u r so lovely,
    so beautiful--so true.
    u know it's meant to be,
    when u love me--and i love u....................(how about it?) (yours was tyte)
     
  4. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling ya flow boo!!! Sooo powerful. Glad you understood where I was comin from.

    Holla back!!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Both of you...Very good flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and in da midnight hour
    u bloom like my flower
    ya love is posed
    soft & meek
    make my heart skip a beat
    the sunshine smile grace ya face
    no one can take ya place
    ya sweet galop of love
    was a gift from above
    sweet as honey dew
    simple i love u
    through & through
    ya my apple of joy
    make me feel like a boy
    gentle whispers
    tender care
    without u i cannot bare
    lovin u is all i am
    inside my heart a place 4 u
    just stay near my lovin boo..................passing it on down...Next))
     
  7. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you make my heart beat softly
    you touch me
    and i lose control, slowly
    i let you take hold of me
    and let go of everything
    for i need nothing
    but you here beside me
    i can't see
    just how i couldn't love you
    you put the definition
    in webster's under "boo".
    this love, this love mannn,
    has GOTTA be true.
    sometimes i ask myself
    what i would do without you
    If I had never met you,
    would i be here today?
    And then I have to sincerely wipe my tears away.
    For I know that I couldn't continue
    One more day
    If your love was suddenly taken away.

    :hammer: ARRGH! wanted to continue but ran out of things to say. kinda got crappy at the end anyway. someone jump on it doe...
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh so very tyte!
    from the first and looking
    forward to reading the rest!
    Ya'll do tha thang!
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your touch is my pleasure,
    your cries my pain.
    Without you in my life
    I could never be truly the same.
    One minute of your love,
    is greater than any hate.
    So taste my essence
    and know that I'm not
    fake.
    You know how to freak
    me, not my body but my
    mind.
    But when you put it down
    like you put it down it's always
    one of a kind.
    your beauty is from within
    not from without,
    but your jus as sexy as any
    man without any doubt.
    Your my summer breeze
    in the middle of the rain,
    the stroke of your finger
    makes my wildness go
    tame.
    Keep me on my toes,
    even better my whole feet.
    I would never ever
    ever let any of yo precious
    juices seep.
    your smile in my face is what
    I wanna wake up to every morn,
    if not then seriously my heart
    will be torn.
    definition of boo, of sexy,
    of sweet,
    of loving, caring, and sho
    nuff unique.
    What would I do without you
    is most def a mystery,
    but I dare not think of that
    cuz fa now your here with me.

    Hoped you liked it gave it my best! :);)
     
  10. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast: CHEERS TO YOU SERENTI!!! I :heart: 'D IT!!!

    YALL KEEP HITTIN THIS THANG!!
     
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