Black Poetry : My Star on Shine

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  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enter a room and the world excepts me for who I am
    My star is most definetly on shine
    I open my mouth to let melodious sounds come out
    And my star is still on shine
    I come here and let my mind take flight
    and still my star is on shine
    I tell the truth about me and my world
    where ever I go and i am content to
    let this star of mine shine where ever I go
    taking on new challenges and then
    expressin' them in my peotic flow
    Does my star glow
    No
    Is it a glimmer of hope to dark world
    No
    Can I light just one path on my journey
    No
    My star shines
    It is a beaken in this cold world
    I can light the path of the entire world
    And yes even in my darkest hour when I can't see clear
    my star still shines
    because I show that it takes heart to get here
    So every where I go and in everything I do
    I let my star shine to be a blessing to you
    To inspire greatness to rise from within
    Never doubting the power of just one mind
    Yes my dear
    My star gone stay on shine
    My star gone stay on shine
    My star gone stay on shine
    My star gone......you understand


    My star on shine
    and it will stay that way
    It matters not if I fail on my way
    I still stand at the end of the day
    And so I will stand with a pen in my hand
    And shine on

    :thinking: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :thinking:

    Thank you to everyone for watching my growth.
    I feel my true talents coming through and it's about to get explosive :explode:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice let it shine right on !
     
  3. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much for feelin' my shine.
    I hope you too continue to shine on as well.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop poet
    keep them coming
     
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    Never withhold your brilliance from the world.

    Make 'em look at your shine like they're looking at the sun.

    Nice piece.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you very much for appreciating my shine.
    I love the way the world can be so open to the things
    that ones mind can create.
    continue to watch my growth hopefully I can surprise the world.
     
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    Hi soulful2006
    I am loving how you express
    your star and the shine you feel from it
    thank you for sharing your glow dear poet

    Peace
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much for your love and support of mystar shining so brightly.
    I oonly hope that everyone else can shine on like I have and will continue to.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm still here with the pen in my hand months later
    still trying to help my fellow man and its quite ok
    If you don't understand
    that my future fits in the the palm of my hand
    It is pen and just
    It goes on and on and
    Well I feel as thoguh you can clearly see
    That if no one else is I'm proud of me
    All because
    My star gone stay on shine
    My star gone stay on shine
    My star gone stay on shine
    My star gone......you get it
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sister....


    i havent readed much lately and i see that you are new here a destee,s place..


    i mean maybe you are around for a while (and i was not much around that made me not notice you)


    but i just wanted to say...


    move on up...


    whatever you are going trough...
    stay close to god...

    and shine ..we need a lot of light here in this world





    here...

    i send you some aurora :flowers:





    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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