Black Poetry : My spirit is paralyzed!!

Andreattah

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Sep 25, 2003
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I lie awake in my space..
my time..my venting space..
Everyday battles that leave the same scars
Looking out..
It's quite blurry behing these mental bars
No a soul i see,no a soul i hear
Seems like time just froze
But i continued steppin'
Never a distinction of whether i was leaving
or coming..

Pain in my knees
Putting me on reverse mode
The strain in my eyes precluding my vision
Fickle relations being the central factor
..putting me under pressure
See,from a woman I BECAME
And into a woman I BECOME

My days are devasted by confussion,misunderstandings
of battles already fought
Prevailing never became the issue
but then look at my scars..
They still bleed

I made a deal with my herat
Took a giant leap of faith
Ended up hearing classic songs that have never been written
I made a deal with my heart
Got an open heart surgery
Didn't know that the demons would come crashing in
Yes,its true...
A RAID took place in my HEART
and it left my spirit paralyzed!!
 
Andreattah nice script enjoyed it but let me drop this up in here

You spit lyrics wise but your spirit is paralyzed
With the stroke of a pen the smoke will begin disguised
As writing, with damp clout you could stamp out problems
Camp out and mob them like Indian scouts, you can resolve them
To write sincere can strike fear into cats, so keep clear stats
I’m a freak where the beer at?
 
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