Black Poetry : my spirit free

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Dec 16, 2003.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    One i want to speak to...One man I want to see
    One who sets my heart agoin
    who lets my head/body run free

    He's not so much you'd call good looking
    not completely on the ball
    but that man has got that something
    good God in heaven he can ball
    and carry me up to the heavens
    leave me feeling 3 times 7

    And if that man don't call me soon...I'm gonna march up to his room
    and say:

    You're the man i think about dear
    you're the one now can't you see
    you're the one i want to speak to
    you're the one i want to be with
    you're the one i want to too..
    you're the one who keeps
    my spirit free
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya here that man ....speak on flow on
    poet of da week
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this i feel
    nice vibe...
    flow on dat man...wooo
    :angel1:
     
  4. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is soooo cute!!
    Keep it coming.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you just have to speak on it...nice write.
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thanks yall

    he's got that something that just comes..
    that something that just comes to..
    that something that just comes to you
    ..definitely got to speak on...
    glad you got the vibe...cute well maybe...
    definitely flowing....and coming...that something...
    that just comes...



    $$rich$$
    mzblkangel
    hiclass_female
    watzinaname...

    the 4 sending cheer
    your names lush and poetic
    help me pass through fear
     
  7. Destee

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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaay Sister Deepy :wave:

    did he call or did you hafta go on up there :wink:

    nice to read you ... thanks for sharing!

    :birthday: Happy New Year !!! :birthday:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    he called...i went

    and he came...and i left...

    in those young years..when the waters continually flowed
    and the world had so many roads..
    singing and playing
    playing and singing..
    till i found the one to truly harmonize with


    thanks for the read and the birthday wishes ms. destee...
    may it continue to be blessed for you in the new year...
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep deeply
    Happy New Year
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister I'm relatin....
    love the way you captured
    the feeling so well
    flow on!
     
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