Black Poetry : My special woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chaya Chaim, Feb 22, 2016.

  1. Chaya Chaim

    Chaya Chaim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the way you smile
    How we used to make the city go wild
    I wish I could of had your child
    You are so special to me, that I'd see your face in the clouds

    It's been 7 years that Yahawah took you
    When your mom told me you passed I didn't think it was true
    How can someone so sweet get taken out of the blue?
    I regret daily I didn't express my feelings to you

    You are so special and I wish I could still hold you like a glove
    I hope reading this will make you smile from above
    You are so special me like watching doves
    I miss you daily and I will never forget you my love
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Chaya,

    I actually read this the day you dropped it. I didn't respond at the time, because it was so close to home. My daughter's life was stolen, I miss her dearly daily and I know it may be silly, but I wish I never encouraged her to wait until she's married and ready to have a baby... a part of her would still be with us.

    I know our pain is different, but I'm able to relate to some degree and I'm sorry for you loss. The good that is in loss, is our ability to keep them with us through beautiful memories we'll always have.

    Thanks for sharing this heartfelt piece

    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This was deep sweet and kind
    every word line by line
    it's so dear and divine
    when express the love while the heart shine

    This was beautifully done and touching....
     
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