Black Poetry : My Sparkling Night Star

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  1. URGelus

    URGelus Active Member MEMBER

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    For the first time in my life I am speechless and don’t know what to say,
    So I stand before you now with my heart exposed asking my pen to lead the way.
    I can’t explain it, I can’t even understand it; there are too many thoughts running through my mind.
    My heart skips a beat each time I hear your voice, but will that withstand the test of time?
    When I close my eyes I can see my future mapped out, so detailed, so clear.
    A doctorate, summerhouse on the beach, three kids, an Escalade, and you are also there.
    My entire life had been turned upside down so I ran from relationships because of all the problems they posed.
    You were that single shining star that showed me that my life was only dark because my eyes were closed.
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovin this lots!

    Absolutely beautiful and so sweet and romantic! It is just one of the classic examples of Black on Black love....
    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a heart felt flow of beauty
    wit ya eyez closed .....wow!
     
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    thiswas well posed enjoy reading
     
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    my goodness
    the scribe you pose
    have touched my heart
    and bring once again
    the dawn of light
    nice very nice
    feeling this
    Peace
     
  6. angelicsage

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    You were that single shining star that showed me that my life was only dark because my eyes were closed.

    now that's love...
    this was unbelievably touching
    you may grace us with more of this...anytime
    Beautiful work!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful!!
     
  8. URGelus

    URGelus Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank You All

    I wanted to post this before I gave it to him to see what you all thought. I am so glad you liked it. Thank you for all the positive feed back now I can go ahead to give it to him.


    Thanks again

    URGelus
     
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