Black Poetry : My Soul's Resuscitation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Feb 19, 2002.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flatline of a loveline
    that started within
    my soul

    Heated, burning
    like
    boiling blood

    Churning
    &
    Yearning
    for a
    faint throb in
    this the soul
    that loves
    unconditionally

    That soul oh
    so vibrant
    & alive
    is now buried
    deep in an
    impetuously
    unsolicited demise

    A slave to the rhythm
    of a loving nature
    going
    ~~~~going
    ~~~~~~~~gone
    too soon

    Temperature's on the
    rise causing beads of
    sweat to suffocate my
    mortally wounded
    countenance as I
    strain to regain
    a principled pleasure
    I know simply as YOU

    Delirium tremens
    convulse my spirit
    as if to shake it
    back to an existing
    state of consciousness
    to feel love again

    Dying
    then
    living
    by the beating pulse
    of my soul and yes, your own

    Gasps for breaths of
    air to revive my inner
    self

    Lapping hungrily
    for ozone overdoses
    to resuscitate remnants
    of a regurgitated love
    so for real

    One
    Two
    Three times
    then Four
    pounds on the chest
    that encloses my
    silent heart

    Inject me
    to
    Resurrect me

    Palpitations
    chime with
    beats in
    2 by 2 clots

    Pressure points
    are
    warming to a
    feverish hot

    Expiration of love
    is not an option

    Scream out loudly
    through my love's
    quintessence so
    eager to
    be heard

    Holdin' on
    for the
    love of you

    Yeah,
    Feel Me
    Need Me

    Bring back
    love to this soul…

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Q - you lay it down for sho' man
    don't let nobody tell you different

    dssNY
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    excellent scribe!! i agree wit My Soja... you
    indeed gets down fa yours! don't stop... :D

    :heart:
    MEB.
     
  4. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ladies...

    we need some soul resuscitators over hea...Q is having a SOUL attack. yeal...right this way, please.

    continue the flow.
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep...

    that soul is fiercely in need of mouth to mouth!!! :laugh:

    Thanks for the read ya'll...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A MASTERPIECE bru.... u speak da real deal and i feel it....
     
  7. epiphany

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    GQ...

    Creatively captivating..
    and the title just beckon me in
    well done poet.....:toast:


    Epiphany :heart:
     
  8. blackfox

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    Bro

    You laid some artistic wordplay down. Good Scribe!


    blackfox
     
  9. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    I like this "emergency room" emergence of crucial medicinal perfectly prescribed prose...

    get well soon

    peace
    g-man
     
  10. j'hiah

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    yo here's a word i never use- tremendous.

    *classic*
     
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