Black Poetry : My Soul Deeply Likes You

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your pen
    bleeds joy into
    ...my spirit.
    my soul
    deeply likes you

    at times
    I find myself alone
    with a smile edged
    on my face
    ...it's you
    runnin' across my mind
    leavin' wonderful trails
    of your memories.

    ...your
    conversations
    of long strolls in
    nature's thickness
    ...your
    eyes drink in
    incredible visions of
    Old Oak Trees, haven to
    beauitful creatures.
    nature's symphony
    ...serenade
    foliage vigorously
    dancin' in the breeze.
    the stream's ripple reflect
    ...sun beams
    that twinkle in
    your eyes.

    my soul
    deeply likes
    ...partakin' in you
    Nyour mental's
    breathtakin' perspectives


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    Coco :heart:



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  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so honored to be the first of many to say
    I liked dis here
    smooth and I wish U were talkin bout me
    **** dare go my ego again (my bad)
     
  3. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    coco.


    ...when i was done reading this
    the first thang i said was...
    ...mmm mmm mmm!! :)

    i'm lovin' it!! & thankin' you for
    sharing it!!

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin this!

    thank you Poetess! :heart:

    alyce
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaz,
    The honor is mine when
    you feel my peace.

    elayne,(see me's try'n) :)
    I'm happy yous lovin' it.

    Alyce,
    If you feel me....
    I know I'm do'n something right.

    Thanks for the love yall
    It's peace....Bigtime!

    Coco :heart:
     
  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    o snap

    you did it again

    ~smoooooooth~ :)

    pd
     
  7. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful write! Thank you.

    Bert
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    being an admirer of OLD, OAK TREES...

    let me say that i love the NATURAL DANCE of this.:) may i dance with you...SOMEDAY.:)

    beautiful PEACE.

    THANK YOU.
     
  9. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    coco,

    your pen deeply likes the pad...I deeply like this piece...wonderful queen. Keep doin that dang thang!


    blak
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Butta~

    I can't say enuff on how I love what you do with your language! Ima fan foreva...

    Reas
     
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