Black Poetry : MY SOLID GROUND....IS SHAKING

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yesterday was "MOTHER'S DAY", and this is a shot out to you,
    they're sorry mom for all the pain...they ever put you through.

    The many years you stood by them...and died a little for each,
    you patched their wounds, and dried their tears...and kept them close...within your reach.

    You fed them and clothed them...and did it with care,
    when they got sick...their burdens, you'd bear.

    ((((((((((((((((((((((((I SEEN IT)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
    ((((((((((((((((I WATCHED ALL OF THIS ...)))))))))))))))))))))
    ((((((((((((((((((((((((((((BUT)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))


    I wrote this for the others...you know...the ones you kept with you?
    well, see...they didn't have time to honor you.
    no matter what they put you through.

    I know you did all this mom...cause I watched in pain... as you did it,
    and I refuse to see the hurt that you'll have,
    I just can't...let them take you through it.

    But I'm here for you mom...you know...the one you gave away?
    I'm filling in for your other kids...on this very special day.

    Mom...I called you 7 times yesterday...
    yes, ..it was me on the other end,
    when you answered the phone the last time,
    I said I was a dear old friend.

    I wanted so bad to say...HEY MOM, IT'S ME
    but in my heart I knew it's me...you didn't want to see.

    So I cleared my throat, ..held back the tears,
    just to manage ...to give you a grin.

    I didn't want to hear the pain in your voice,
    of the fear...that it wasn't them.

    I love you Mom...
    but I'm not "THEM"​
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt this so deep
    wow
    nice drop
    thanks for sharing....
    Peace Angel
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this is some hardcore pain in this poem...
    i felt all of this...much love sis
    one love
    khasm
     
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    What a beautiful
    soul you are!
    I loved it as if
    I could feel
    through your
    very own heart.
    Wonderful,beautiful Piece!
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah Yeahn, nice drop, luvven it
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for taking the time to show luv. I was feeling it too.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was felt to the core...believe that. Thanks for the luv.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dear sis :grouphug:
    much love to you
    feeling the deepness
    you place in this scribe
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THIS WAS AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
    FLOW ON WOW!!
     
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    These words hit like an arrow. Anyone can feel the ache here. Seems like you're the bigger person...Peace.
     
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