Black Poetry : My Slumber

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Within my slumber
    I can feel your soul pulling mine
    Last night was heaven's dream
    No matter the miles your close

    Within my slumber
    I feel your pull


    The winds ties us together
    You are my light…
    I am your moon
    A life ride I am willing to
    Take with you
    Upon the heavens
    Within the clouds
    You took me there

    Your soul calls me
    Wraps me in and spoils me
    Moving my spirit towards you
    As we embrace the starz gleam
    My truth comes to life
    Knowing I am made for you

    Your soul moves me

    Last night I felt your warmth
    I could feel your soul…
    A million miles away
    Last night you was with me
    Laying in my bed
    Loving me…

    No matter the distance, I feel your soul

    Last night
    You kissed me
    Brought breathe into me
    Held me like a baby
    And gave me life
    Feed me love so free
    Like a running fountain
    From paradise
    Last night
    I took a sip

    Within my slumber
    I can feel your pull


    Slow motion
    As each notion
    Took on emotions
    Passion sung out our names
    Like the room was on fire
    Taking your time
    Loving me
    Last night
    Kissing and hugging me
    Caressing and loving me

    My truth…

    Within my slumber
    Last night was heaven's dream

    No matter the miles your close

    (c) 2005
    A New Vision
    Passion Paradise
    Book 1​
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was peaceful. Quite a lovely write.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mz Blk Angel...

    This piece is BEAUTIFUL. :D

    This is the best you've written in awhile.

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts of him with us. Long distance love can be that way sometimes.

    :toast:
     
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    peace,

    ahhhhhhhhhh dammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnn!

    u got a brotha at a loss for thought here - Nothing but a beautiful painting of love all thru this joint..........

    Makes me wanna sit on the rivers edge barefoot & smile for no reason at all!!!

    powerful write........

    peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
    this just blew me away in the sweet warm mold
    i love this piece wow! sista Angel
     
  6. MrFolklore

    MrFolklore Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I felt you too...across the winds your love takes me. I have enjoyed this to the fullest, words can not claim the emotions that ran with this scribe.

    :hearts2:
     
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