Black Poetry : MY SISTERS AND ME

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  1. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    MY SISTERS AND ME


    I have four knock-out sisters
    Each one of them fine
    All of them warriors
    and swift with the mind

    I don't know what the creator was thinkin
    when he grew us from the same womb
    when he nurtured our seedlings with the same potent fluids

    one I call the negotiator
    A strong confident soul
    she grabs what she wants
    with a firm hardy hold

    One is a philosopher
    dazzzzzzled with life
    interpreting it's flavor
    and savoring it's strife

    one has a spirit like peaches and cream
    A princess by nature
    Any mans dream

    The other is ruff
    with fire in her veins
    A warrior fighter can't conquer nor drain

    Then there is I
    the eldest of all
    I watched them all blossom
    from the day they were born

    We argued.... kicked.... faught.... and scratched
    but that never ever stopped us
    from having each others backs

    Some sisters are ruthless
    will cut the throats of each other
    just to sniff the groins of a fine lookin brother
    Manipulating truths and twisting it to lies
    to lay in the bossom of a brothers big eyes


    I never could understand the concept of such needs
    Am I my sisters keeper
    Hell yeahhhhh!!!! Yes indeed!!!!

    I could love my man 'til the end of my life
    But if he F**k's with my sister's
    he'll be sportin my knife

    Sometimes I catch them just staring at me
    I question not what their thinking. I know what it be
    They wonder how someone so gentle and sweet
    turns when their in danger to an abominible beast

    I'd always protect them, thats what I sworn
    Perhaps thats why they call me
    their sweet quiet storm

    My Sisters and me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    very talented group of sista worriors indeed each
    and everyone has a unique style but share da same
    smile yet protect and hold each other back
    tyte drop fo real sis....purple
     
  3. PurpleMoons

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    Thank you Brother Rich!

    People tend to gather around us
    just to feel the love for each other
    we share!

    I do love them so!!!
     
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    Sister this was completely off the chain...
    ~~~~~Riveting~~~~~
    this was such an amazing peace
    and you are so blessed to have
    such phenomenal sisters...
    it made me think and appreciate
    my own siblings more...although
    their not all girls...it was still
    very stirring...

    Awesome flow Sister, Awesome flow
     
  5. Vincy Ital

    Vincy Ital Active Member MEMBER

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    You are truly blessed to have such stong Queens as your sisters. I can tell you got nuthin but love for them. You wrote this piece superbly.....Nice one, sista, very, very good
     
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    awwwww i loved this
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

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    You are blessed to have sisters
    and the love in this scribe
    shows they are bless as well to have you
    smooth right enjoyed the read POET!!!!! :D
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    PurpleMoons

    Incredible flow...

    Great vibe...

    Much love...nothing but love.

    :thanks: for sharing your love of your Sisters with us.

    :toast:
     
  9. Eric Mitchell

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    Feeling you on this. I am the eldest in my family as well, and I understand what it is to protect those you love and admire them for who they are.
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The love you feel for your sisters is so evident in this write. I liked the way you took the time to put each one into detail. Any sibling would appreciate this piece.
     
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