Black Poetry : my sista, my lover, my friend

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sista, my lover, my friend—


    Hey

    I have been watching you—

    Not obsessing—

    But waiting patiently—
    For you to realize that us—
    Is a strength that we have yet to discover—
    I’ve waited four lifetimes—
    To exchange conversations and—
    Chit-chat on the worlds matters and—
    Still the talk is more intense than—
    Intellectual intercourse—
    You mind feed me from afar—
    And I love the taste—
    An unparalleled recipe—
    Not yet fully realized—
    Because it must marinade—
    Simmer and set still—

    Just know—
    Your mind is wanted—
    Your body is cherished—
    And your soul is revered—
    By I

    Your brother—
    Your lover
    Your


    Friend.

    thepoetsean
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sir indeed

    she notice u now fo sho !
    showing love big tyme here ......wow !:toast:
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *hanging this on the wall of platinums poets' classics*
     
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    Beautiful Poem!

    A beautiful Poem
    with beautiful sentiment!
    A blessed woman! Peace and Love:peace:
     
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    Well done....

    Beautifully written.....

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  6. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for the gracious replies

    glad that you all can relate to having someone special in your life...sometimes that someone special is sooo close to you that they become insecure and feel that they can't be wanted or needed or cherished or loved just because they are with you...Always take time out to let these people know that the way you express being with them might just be through poetry that might seem like you're expressing yourself to another, when you're really not. if they love you, and understand you they'll be able to embrace it...if not...consider it a part of life's journey.

    nevermeanttohurtnoone...

    sean.
    :nuts:

    once again thanking all those that read for i-blessing my piece

    espee
     
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