Black Poetry : my short story

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by black rose, Dec 8, 2003.

  1. black rose

    black rose Member MEMBER

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    looking at the sky nomore tears running these cheeks
    cause I finally found the truth and knowledge that i've seeked
    the sun is no longer black, but is bright as a fluorecent light
    see you told me that this road would be long and hard
    and to prove you wrong i almost got pulled my card
    that was my wake call realize that i had to prove nothing to no one
    all that negitivety that you were feeding i had to throw it up out of my belly
    in order to move toward the positive things in this world
    listining constanly to the "Utha Side" by NELLY
    it's sorta like a reminda of were i came from in my foolish youth
    and that i have found the truth I'm just simple lady
    and now that i've found knowledge i was in need if simple guidance
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very strong will to bring forth this and see
    all was needed to get pass the black hole
    nice
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep writing and moving forward.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this poem...
    very nice write...:angel1:
     
  5. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice indeed...

    Your short story tells much.

    Knowledge+Wisdom+Understanding= A truly blessed soul.

    Write on.
     
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