Black Poetry : My Shoes... See

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  1. coey30

    coey30 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hell can I speak….. Honestly
    Do hate, I can already hear you as you …. boo’s me
    See being a good man means sometimes she… abuse me
    But never to the point where it black and… blues me
    But I’m better and I… approve of me
    ... The New and… Improved me
    Since I move to Missouri, the women try to… woo me
    But they all look like… Drive-Thrus to me
    Coming out of the wood work looking to… use me
    Im awake and that I… refuse to be
    Then I heard those words from a woman who twice… removed me
    She Said “I love you” and that still… moved me
    It locked into the rhythm of my soul and… grooved me
    Like a lullaby, how those words… soothed me
    This is that deep and is what… brews me
    This love is what I… choose for me
    For better or worse is no… news to me
    But I’m better and stronger is how she… views me
    But this Union of love pays sweet as she… dues me
    I find myself going crazy as she… glues me
    And I refuse to remove tattoos that… previews me
    Off all that she could choose she… chooses me
    And this love is like a dream just… snooze me
    Not to mention how she… screws me
    When I’m lost she leaves… clues me
    Running her fingers up and down my back as she… cruise me
    Leave me in a position that just… ooohs me
    She can see right… through me
    …………….. I farted… excuse me
    Time like those she never… ewes me
    She calls and text just to… schmooze me
    She sees I’m a better man and hates to… lose me
    Just writing this has… enthuse me
    So don’t judge me until you walk in my… shoes see…
     
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    NIce scribe....it was sweet and funny
     
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    coey30 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    enjoyed the flow
     
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