Black Poetry : My Shining Star

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  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remembering love with you makes my heart ache
    Losing you was my grandest life mistake

    Experience with others will never compare
    To the love you and I once shared

    Deep in my soul embedded you are,
    You are my dream, my shining star.

    Your energy and spirit still captivate me
    Where would we be IF there was a "WE?"

    My heart cries, My mind lies
    I miss you, no surprise!

    You have no trust, our hearts filled with lust
    But cannot discuss
    Such intimacies, don't want Her to feel insecurities

    Four years of love gone down the drain
    In our next life, maybe we can try again.

    Deep in my soul embedded you are,
    You are my dream my...
    Shining Star.


    (c)1999 EssenceofAminata
     
    Afridancr, Mar 21, 2001
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AFRIIIII!!!

    sis!! i am so glad to see you!!
    i've been waiting on you!!...

    WELCOME!! WELCOME!! WELCOME!!

    and yessss! i loved the piece!!
    the flow don't stop, huh? (lol)

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
    GA_Sunshyne, Mar 21, 2001
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  3. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well Done

    A heart felt roll--very nice--Amun-Ra
     
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  4. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunshyne~

    Glad to see you too sis!!!

    Amun-Ra~
    Thanks for the read!!!

    Afri
     
    Afridancr, Mar 21, 2001
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri...

    Glad ta be readin' ya flow up in here finally!!!

    L&R (Love & Respect)
    GQ
     
    GQ, Mar 21, 2001
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    gurl!!!!

    i was wondering when u was coming over
    welcome and wow! i love this piece here
    very nubian u touched me here..
     
    nubianlover, Mar 21, 2001
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    very heartfelt flow Afridancr
    thank you for sharing it here

    :heart:

    Destee
     
    Destee, Mar 22, 2001
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya on dis one very nice..........
     
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    Nice piece I like this one.
     
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    THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL, MAN THAT MAKES ME HAVE FLASHBACKZ ON LOST LUV, ALSO UR POEM REMINDS ME OF THAT SONG (MY SHINING STAR)
    BUT NICLY WRITTIN, SO FLO ON WIT NONSTOP

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
    GHETTOAMBITION, Apr 1, 2006
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