Black Poetry : My Route

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GhostDog15, Mar 4, 2004.

  1. GhostDog15

    GhostDog15 Active Member MEMBER

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    Yeah its messy, but I just write, don’t stop heh

    My Route

    My only task, only reason to dash
    Is to choose a path, one without a stash
    One that I can see
    See to be what the world needs
    One that doesn’t work for a high salary
    One that doesn't profit of off oversea slavary
    One that makes me the one, mentally
    One that gains respect to me, not my nationality
    One that shows me, how to live honorly
    A path that can tell me, who I am honestly
    A path that can show me, how to act silently
    A path that can get me, what I want finally
    Everybody wants, to make more the rest
    Everybody dreams to live at the best
    Everybody, believes it’s just a test
    But I don’t wanna
    Can’t see why bother
    Money doesn’t help others
    Money doesn’t show another
    Another, another way to teach each other
    Each other, a new way, just be a brother
    Brother, the other kind, without the color
    Color, shouldn’t matter, words of mother
    I don’t wanna get a office, get stuck with a tie
    I don’t wanna do pro sports, and live like a lie
    I don’t wanna be a thug, hustlin to die
    I don’t wanna be a loser, never leaving my
    I just wanna be the one to answer the call,
    I just wanna be the guy there stiff as the wall
    I just want to be the one, standing there tall
    I just wanna know that I earned that bar
    Lieutenant is just what I want to be yal.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flowing....
    diggin it
    flow on
    Peace angel
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u rocked dis joint wit dis
    and took it to da top
    flow head drop it like it is...
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You just want a straight path not a crooked one, liked this flow, keep em coming.
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    keeping it coming :)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  6. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HI

    LIKE THE FLOW!
    THE PATH IS COMING!!!!!
     
  7. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so many routes
    i feel ya ghost
     
  8. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ghost...

    I know you pose to be inVistable, but I can see you shinin in this...nice bro. :peace: :peace: :peace: :peace:
     
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