Black Poetry : My Rose

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jul 16, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Be my rose
    Be of perfect color and shape
    A beautiful flower in my world of weeds

    Be my rose
    Blooming in my heart
    Shading my soul with your stem of life
    Touching me deep with your thorns of passion

    Be my rose
    My love
    The flower that grows more beautiful each day
    I'll water you with my being
    My body and soul the soil for your roots

    My arms will be your shelter
    Your beauty preserved as freshly new
    My rose, my love
    Living forever
    The rose in my life is you

    BE
     
  2. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow. Yes, yes, pick me, pick me!!!!
    Great poem HB, it was so sweet, so perfect.
    I love it. Maybe I'm just a sentimentalist in denial :)
    *Emma*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed she is da rose of ya eye
    lovely piece and beautifully written Poet !!
     
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