Quiet Poetry Lounge : My Right, My Wrong

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bruce, May 9, 2003.

  1. Bruce

    Bruce Active Member MEMBER

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    At any given time
    I am right or I am wrong
    In these two things
    Who has a greater right to be?
    I am right or wrong by my own reasoning
    Right or wrong for me

    As you stand outside my center
    Observing all the things I do
    Do not judge my actions
    For in their conception
    In their application
    They have nothing to do with you

    No man is an island
    But he stands on his own patch of sand
    There his deeds are his alone
    Only he need understand

    BE
    © May 9, 2003
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    judge me not of my right nor wrong
    Bruce Bruce !
    tyte flow of reality many should guide self unto
    Thankz
     
  3. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice vibe Bruce peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Bruce

    Food for thought
    Some would think not

    But I, on the other hand
    Think the same as this man

    Insightful...

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    nice Bruce! ( There his deeds are his alone. Only he needs to understand)
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we are our own harshest critics....and others cannot judge us as well as we can ourselves...

    good piece...

    K
     
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    nini08 Active Member MEMBER

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    Bruce,
    that was a really good one. i am feelin u all around on that one
     
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