Black Poetry : my rhythm within*

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Jul 11, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    open*

    altered soul left dancing to the changed rhythm within*

    my rhythm within*

    I

    Can’t ever seem to
    Ascend above
    The overwhelming feeling that overcomes i
    Crashing into delusions of you
    Helplessly

    Me...I
    Effortlessly swim in the caramel
    Nile
    That you
    Are...
    Loving every stroke...lingering in your waves...

    Vivaciously
    I
    Soak in all that i know
    I
    Obliviously ingest
    Never ending doses of your amazement...
    Simply breathtaking...

    Overtures of blissful infatuation
    Flustered in the human mind, stirred to the point of unyielded

    Yesterdays and
    Overlooked tomorrows that tell stories to my frame of mine*
    U capture and hold all of everything that is me...

    and i love every second of it*



    (you control my rhythm within.)

    and you know this*


    sean.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes Sir!

    I KNOW THAT'S RIGHT!
    I'VE BEEN MOVED MYSELF DES WAY...
    U FLOW ON ..YA HEARD ME...!
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thepoetsean

    You always share some really good art work.

    "I CATCH MENTAL VISIONS OF YOU" .... very creative Sean!! :wink:


    (clever piece)


    One :heart:
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH and N2

    thank you both for the read. I feel that you guys really feel what i write and I am truly grateful for that.


    sean.
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Richness!

    A richness of flow--painted with "caramel" methaphors for that one who is special--Amun-Ra

    ;)
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    see you catching your mental visions

    and i'm feeling your work

    and you haven't lost the touch, dun
     
  7. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    POET

    CLASSIC RYTHMIC FLOW !!
    PEACE
    G-MAN
     
  8. Desert Storm

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    No,no,no

    I think you know this! sean.
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  9. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    once again...i bow

    thank u all for the reads and the support.


    sean.
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now, this piece, heyah, brings strong vibes, dear poet. very nicely written, if i don't say so myself, sean. i'm lovin' it...yes, indeed!


    ~~~expressedlove~~~
     
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