Quiet Poetry Lounge : My rhymes dope and witty and hope the committee make

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, May 7, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My rhymes dope and witty and hope the committee make
    Me boss I take false cats to school in rap they’ll be a fake
    Fool to duel with this, rhyme cruel and brisk like bitter tea
    Folks consider me royal and loyal to the game never a quitter G
    Like Melons these rhymes come from vines now drink some wine
    Feel dumb sometime with a numb spine and still come online
    To make few decisions about true religion try use reason
    And knowledge now a season for garbage I hate treason
    Some cats write corrupt lines but what is behind their behavior
    They share major problems with psychologists, the wrong flavor
    For society, look MC’S burn if they don’t agree with terms to surrender
    Their microphone some have tender domes better buy as blender
    And comb or have a bad hair day see a sad display why yall write?
    It’s a thug December and I’m a club member why fools voted hype
    To raise dues? Now have days of the blues now ona a jiggy plank
    And have to rob the piggy bank my dignity rank low can’t crank
    Up like junk cars
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the game is strong lyrically
     
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    beautifulblkw Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    great flow......I might have to flow back .......:dj::dj:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rhymebad, just keep those rhymes in full effect.
     
  5. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother......smh
    One of these days I going to rock with ya...I mean it!
    Great Flow and I KNOW you got more
    Flow On
     
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