Black Poetry : My rhymes caught attention as I fought in dismensions

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My rhymes caught attention as I fought in dismensions
    Of grammar ran up winding staircases paid pension
    To pathetic folks and now write energetic quotes
    That raise skies as I gaze into eyes then cast votes
    Saw a teen diva reminded me of queen Lativa had hopes
    With extreme fever “girl wanna get next to you, we can
    Have sex true and watch the complex view of my land-
    Scape while eating pancakes from IHOPP now you understand
    Boo? Bare-faced got hair and lace want an affair to taste
    Your body we can hadrcore party in bed grab your waist
    Have sun kissed skin we can have fun brisk girlfriend”
    “RHYME you give me tons of lip undescript like a whirlwind
    Could hit anywhere, my breasts seem to test my green t-shirt
    They sticking out for you chicken no doubt I’m on keen alert
    You plenty alive with jive after twenty five minutes hope the lust
    Die down but you try go down town and do a quick lick around trust
    Me boo I see right through you, want cake and cream while you make
    Me scream, your **** emerged wanna surge through my panties no mistake
    Your electrical will cause a circuit break on my perfect shape body”
    So boo what you wanna do?” naw what you gonna do?” have a stink party
    And drink Bacardi Rum”
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well yes, looks like your rhymes caught someone's attention. Spicy joint.
     
  3. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    so I read

    this and think your Italian???

    and why would I think that?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!
    now this piece took me by brainstorm
     
  5. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props on this one for real yall
     
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