Black Poetry : ~My Revelation~

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when the day
    comes
    i wll stand tall
    over my trials and tribulations
    but as i speak
    i fight desperately to find
    my revelation...

    my dreams
    should be a
    sin to see...
    but when i open
    my mouth, nobody
    hears me...
    yet my words are
    deafening...

    when i slit
    my wrist
    the devil's blood
    spills from
    me...
    immortality...

    my words
    will be the cause
    of a lonely poet's
    revolution
    i want them to be
    a cause...
    good or bad
    against all demandin odds...
    i want them to have
    a cause
    like stray
    bullets...
    a cause in lives,
    switch and betray you like
    judas...?

    i fight desperately to find a revelation...

    these words
    are the envy of my hoe
    mary jane..
    i swear i hear them
    argue over who gets me the highest
    and i swear it drives my mind
    more insane...
    only if his words were reality
    i'll scream to him to blast
    "5 shots"
    to my brain
    but malik's words
    will remain...

    until i find my reval---(gunshot)
     
  2. Melody

    Melody Active Member MEMBER

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    that showed me troubles and sunshine all in a bundle...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyght scribe i was feelin it in my mental
     
  4. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for peepin my work

    one luv
     
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    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was deep, makes me think....thanks for sharing