Black Poetry : My relm ( just somthing to have some fun )

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drop to your knees and pray out loud
    Morn the death of your ancestors in this poetic shroud

    Slayed past poets this reaper has done
    Never cross my shadows the first rule of thumb

    Shudder in remorse from their course of actions
    Tremble in fear as darkened words attacks them

    Dismembered the limbs so no attached parts could form
    Covered their poetic jest with the killer swarm

    No touching involved and no walls can protect
    Vocals torn from the throat so protect ya neck

    many have croaked from my cloak and bleed from every stroke
    many have soaked in the words from every high note

    Sing my song and i shall rise once again
    Read my name out loud and I shall chill like the wind

    IM the reaper of the words
    the stealer of the sound

    IM the repossesser of falsely forged mics
    before even the bodies hit the ground

    Step into my shadows if you are the braver of the few
    Stand your ground as you release the poetry in you

    there is nothing to fear but fear it's self
    Once you enter my realm you pledge yourself

    The stage is my fraternal order of poetic vibes
    I have claimed many souls but I have saved many lives

    Close your eyes poet and pledge your vowel's
    I am filled with many faces and with many styles

    I will let you do ya thing poet unless you choke
    I can fill you with life or banish you in smoke.

    I am the stage where you perform
    I am the Bright lights so warm
    i am the quiet hush when you enter this place
    I am onlooking eyes in everyone's face
    I am snaps and claps if ya do your thing
    I am the poetry cafe...........
    ...............................................................so enter my ring!


    Caramelpython
    5/25/2004
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  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well now this was tight
    freestyle flow....in your realm
    i likes flow some more...
    Angel :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte free flow
     
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    Was that a challenge? ...okay, here I come, and it won't be pretty :nono: when I get there :court:

    I'll make you wish, you never met a queen like me
    gonna bounce you off the ropes like...the boxer "Ali"

    I'll bust you down, in front of everybody on the threads
    and by the time I'm done with you...you'll need ...
    "3" hospital beds.​

    okay family, time to vote for the winner!! and may the best man/queen win.

    1. Python ...58 (votes)
    2. Queentswana ...1256 (votes)

    never underestimate the power of a woman :laugh: :wink: :laugh:

    that was a tight piece...I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful flow brother
    liking how yall bringing it
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol @ queentwana... I enjoyed this crafty style...poetry cafe...tight write.
     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzblkangel...... thanks angel I just felt trying to drop somthing ( It's been awhile )

    $$RICH$$.... :thanks: just trrying to stay active on the form

    queentswana........ Ok u know u did a no no I shall addressis soon.

    Bluewater....... :thanks: I am pleased you enjoyed it.

    watzinaname............. Yes she is funny I know... SMH :thanks: sister.
     
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    Love the originality...
    No touching involved but nothing
    can protect you, not even walls...
    that was a tyte verse...

    Nice piece...
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sage :thanks: for the love sister. ;)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is always nice reading you
    ya know how i feel about all your poetry
    flow head on....Angel
     
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