Khasm13 : my relationship with my penmanship...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    my diary of diction doubles when displayed
    and becomes further frayed when fools frolic in the shade...
    just making the grade i use my eraser tip as a maid
    cause she cleans up the dirt at work in my mind
    when the blade finds my back to insert...
    my pen pens the happiness to the hurt
    and the promise to the pain
    on some days i can even capture a single droplet or water
    after a cleansing and washing rain...
    sometimes i play with my pen...but she knows it's not a game
    for shame for even thinking that this could be a game...
    when i don't touch her just write she tells me i'm too simple and plain
    all the while the paper thas stained overpowers the devil's disdain
    and helps to keep me grounded and sane...
    especially in a country that worships old sam hain moving in the fast lane...
    as i turn away...the pen pulsates...this is not a game
    and the mic says the same...
    i hold both tightly in hopes of them screaming out my name
    as i swim through the accumulated cascading currents that crash
    and are never tame...
    throwing this pen like a dart with the goal being
    to strike with precision accuracy and accurate aim...
    at night she whispers in my ear..."u can never be lame"
    consciously i believe her but subconsciously i battle lack of confidence
    as a bane like an addict battles cain...
    nightmares of the night are purposely given hype when i write
    like dana dane...
    i don't know why she keeps coming around
    i guess she likes my type cause i don't bite and run poetic trains
    i'm content with just me and her...i don't require flow-etic fame...
    through all of this she has showed me that this relationship is 4 real
    and no matter what...will never be a game....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see tis what i be saying but u laid it out best when we are pitted up against thy
    penmanship and the true relation we pose ....AWESOME SCRIBE bruh !
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A writer's relationship with the pen, no it can never be a game. The pen knows when we are laying a piece of ourselves out there for all to read. Truly appreciated the way this was posed poet.
     
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    Automatic

    Your pen does rock the spot
    Its ill around the clock
    That talent of yours,
    Automatic Doc!
    :SuN019:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i feel you poet

    yes i see you don't take this as a game

    you have a real poetic fire

    that's the love

    for what you do

    i can feel the fire

    dedication
     
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    A pen to the hand is like "the water to the skin" very real and personal. Your pen & hand have a awesome relationship.
    I love this piece poet ...^5
     
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