Black Poetry : My Rage

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  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My rage is cause I was sold out
    Dragged away denied the traditional
    Oral passage of my history
    Beaten down
    I watched
    my mother raped legally
    Sister raped legally
    Stripped of all outward forms of dignity
    Lied to about who I am
    Indoctrinated with who I am not
    Now I am Free!
    Whose free?
    Who the hell is me?
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U R whom u be
    a man of da free
    a brutha 2 see
    u be whom u be
    a poet
    a reality checker
    indeed u r what u r and what u r 2 be ....
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh **** Rich
    you ain't spose ta come wit it like dat
    showing me up and all (lol)

    Thank you for the insight and voice
    well said poet
     
  4. Aaliyahmonay

    Aaliyahmonay Member MEMBER

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    Who U Are

    U are someone who has a lot of talent and ur poems are the bomb. Don't let yoself down, as u stand on concrete ground, keep yo head up shaz and stay strong for yourself and for others that look up to u. I can be like a sista to u, so if u ever need help with anything, i'm here 4 u shaz.

    Aaliyahmonay
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaliyahmonay
    you make a brother feel so special all the time
    thank you
     
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    Aaliyahmonay Member MEMBER

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    U Are

    U are someone special!

    Aaliyahmonet
     
  7. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shazzy.


    & all the poets said "a-men!" :)

    & afta that... all imma say is...
    ...thank you for sharing.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What U R

    is tyght as hell !!!! ;)
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shaz,

    brother you are well understood, believe that...keep dropping the lessons that have us question our true progression...and transgressions.

    bless
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaz

    Brutha this is so true! Keep speakin on it!

    Reas
     
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