Black Poetry : My Queens

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Dec 26, 2003.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Voice, reminiscent of an orchesrtra of flutes & violins.
    A choir of Angels accompanied by heavenly instruments.
    Skin, 16 shades of beautiful brown
    The object of others affection,
    The most sought after fashion around.
    Smile, bright as a super nova, natural Bling-Bling.
    I long to kiss her lips, tasting the sweetness they bring.
    Stepping gracefully among her subjects,
    Head held high with pride.
    Devine and refined, exhuding confidence with each stride.
    The hypnotic sway of her hips, the intelligent curve of her back,
    The way that she flips when disrespected,
    The way only a sister could react.
    She's God's blessing to mankind.
    Her flawless beauty withstands time.
    That's why it's impossible to guess her age.
    Nothing in this universe could ever make this brother stray.
    My Nubian Queen demands respect,
    From me that's what she will get.
    I am forever her loyal subject.
    To cherish, defend, and protect
    With my last breath.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful, brotha. What a great ode to the nubian ladies.....thank you....
     
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    tenderly from the heart...this was devine...feeling the flow...very nice
    Peace
    Blue
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a sweet beauty u speak dis was heart warming u pose
    tyte drop
     
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    sweet flow
    just wonderful...Angel
     
  6. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank U 4 the feel, fam.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u welcome my brother :angel1:
     
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    indeed the warmth is all good
     
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    awwwwwwww...:grouphug:
    this was simply breathtaking...only a King could scribe words so sweet...:heart:
    you have a heart of gold my brotha
     
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    ah Pos, this is so artfully posed. love it. and I agree 100% - sistahs are the most beautiful women in the world, without doubt.
     
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