Black Poetry : " my queen has conceived "

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ... oh the things we learn
    the things we yearn sometimes burn us..
    must be crazy if we believe what doesn't directly involve us shouldn't concern us...
    lessons spin off time and they turn us but right now you're thinking
    " but see you started this poem off wrong....
    wasn't this supposed to be a love song b/c look at the title?? :confused: "
    yeah that's what you say but l'm far from an american idol.

    now peep my title

    i'd give anything for my son or daughter to be wise and strong
    so it turns out that this is a love song...
    and i was that poem that started out wrong

    the dimension of who is my beautiful wife
    is now a beautiful mother...
    l thank God she was there when l had to suffer- she gave me the kiss of life..
    believing my mind and my heart..
    so she gets the rose..
    man l'm glad i get to buy her maternity clothes :wink:
    i don't believe the world can take another son with handsome looks like mine..
    i can't wait until we strike our first pose
    but God knows that...

    i remember the things i have learned and still learning..
    there are different things l'm yearning...
    different fires in me are burning
    all for God... all for the queen of the sea... all for the son/daughter to be
    even for you..
    here's a poet(ess) to add to Destee's family tree...

    my queen has conceived
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This such a lovely write.:)
     
  3. SmoovVerbiage

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    This was soul-sweet to read...

    It seems like only yesterday we all were playing in Destee's poetic playground.
    and now I read you are married and expecting a son or daughter... WOW!
    Though, I'm sorry I missed the opportunity to congratulate you on your wonderful union.
    I'm thankful through this heartfelt write, to share in the joyful moment of knowing soon,
    a wonderful bundle of joy will soon enhance the life of you and your wife.

    Congratulations! Make every moment memorable.


    SmoovV
    aka Cocobutterskyn
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes

    congrads poet

    and i told you you were one of the best poets i've read

    well that just continues here

    missed your stuff man


    and i would say your poem started off just fine

    thank you
     
  5. Ikoro

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    Congratulations (a little late maybe?) with the kids and the marriage.

    Your writing flowed so well, and was beautifully conceived.

    Deep and humble respect for your queen, who must be quite the lady.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    Just felt like warm thoughts flowing onto the page, which it was. Poetry doesn't always start out with Wherefore art Thou. So nice to read a piece from you and congratulations to you and your wife.
     
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    this was a beautiful script from da heart
     
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