Black Poetry : "My Promise to You"

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  1. Vincy Ital

    Vincy Ital Active Member MEMBER

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    This burning desire inside my heart
    Like a raging and out of control fire deep in my soul
    I knew you were the one for me
    You put me at pure ecstacy

    I thank God that I made the right decision
    And embarked upon this grand expedition
    Leading to the center of your soul
    You said that I make you whole
    I make you feel like a man, I am the one
    Your one and only sugar plum

    My husband, My King
    It is my honour to wear this diamond ring
    The symbol of our love
    As pure as a snow white dove

    This promise is never to be broken
    Not so long as these words are spoken:
    "I shall be there through sickness and health
    'Til death do us part
    I promise to be the one to mend your broken heart"

    I will be your wife, I will be your Queen
    Now it is my shoulder where I want you to lean
    Lean to cry
    Lean to laugh
    Lean on my shoulder when you need me to graph
    To graph the path that I think is right
    What's right for you
    So you can always see the light

    The light of our undying love
    THe light of our eternal promise
    The light of our family
    Once two, now one
    Can you believe that we've only just begun

    In ten years I can't imagine where we'll be
    With this everlasting love you can bet we'll be the angels atop the
    family Christmas tree

    I vow to love you forever
    My dear soul mate
    'Til it is time for me to enter into the Golden Gate
    Where I shall meet my Savior and thank Him for you
    Thank Him for the man that holds me together like glue
    It is my privelage to be the Mrs. You
    And trust in me, I won't let you down boo.



    Written by: Sista Vi-tal-ity (better known to the Family as Sista Vincy)
    *inspired by the feelings in the depths of my heart and soul*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done
     
  3. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was beautiful
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very beautiful and touching poem.. certainly he must have his chest out. nice write.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very touching poem laid well
    tight drop!!!
     
  6. Vincy Ital

    Vincy Ital Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Family for your love and support.....This has been a rough and confusing time for me and all of you have been wonderful....I know when I first came here, I said I only write music, etc, but, sometime you gotta go back to ya roots and hit em with the poetry. I was a little nervous to post, being among such great poets, im a rookie, but im glad I did it.....I'll be posting more often
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a wonderfully passionate peace
    scribed straight from the heart
    we need more men and women...
    who will dare to love so faithfully...

    Wonderful flow Sister!
     
  8. Vincy Ital

    Vincy Ital Active Member MEMBER

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    God bless you and thank you for the love.......In fact, I do dare to love so faithfully, love is a wonderful thing.....but, I have yet to find the King to devote this fire inside of me......


     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista Vincy

    I absolutely love this piece! My, what a wonderful love you have described. Peace and blessings to a woman who deserves it all. It's good to read you sista.
     
  10. Vincy Ital

    Vincy Ital Active Member MEMBER

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    my Dear Jazzy,

    Thank you for the love, I really need the support to push forward.....your words always touch my heart, Im glad that you liked it
     
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