Black Poetry : My Private Parts

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MY PRIVATE PARTS

    From the end to beginning
    From the finished to the start
    The government wants to get in: my private parts, my private parts
    My private parts

    They looking at my Draws, want to see what I saw
    They even want to know the last time I took a fart
    My private parts, my private parts, my private parts

    FBI on the internet and I’m getting upset
    They trying to trace all my Web page marks
    My private parts, my private parts, my private parts

    No privacy and no decency
    If I was a tree the feds would strip the bark
    My private parts, my private parts, my private parts

    When the last time I slept and took a wept or a fall
    My last meal was a strawberry Pop tart
    And they want to know it all
    My private parts, my private parts, my private parts

    Get away from me your like a wart
    My private parts, my private parts, my private parts

    My private parts, my private parts, my private parts
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    different...i liked this...
     
  3. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i ENJOYED THIS WRITE!:hearts2:
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can say this was totally unique kind of flava keep doing whatcha do flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What can be found out about us, without us even knowing is scary. I really like the way you brought this poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u did it again with this awesome creation
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice delivery
    Yes we have no privacy anymore
    They are watching all we say and do
    Much Love Poet
     
  8. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YO! That was fly. My private parts... Yeah, they trying to monitor us.

    Sweet :)

    ~Ikoro
     
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