Black Poetry : My Prayor

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  1. PoeticThoughts

    PoeticThoughts Member MEMBER

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    You dont have to hit me
    to hurt me, your words
    and actions can hurt
    a lot more...You hurt
    me more than words
    can explain, I can't
    take this anymore
    If you look into my
    eyes you will see
    all the tears I cried
    because of you NO,
    just because of all
    the things you do...
    To you O Loard I
    pray please come
    take this pain away,
    help me look forward
    to the next day...If
    I had one wish, I'd
    wish to have wings
    so I can fly far away,
    away to a much
    better place...
    A place where there
    will be no more
    cloudy days...
    A place where
    I can have a
    smile on my face...
    A place where
    all the pain you
    given me will
    go away...
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet kimy i read youre poem and i felt it i know the feeling i know the path for you i send a poem now.....iits called pleace dont give up the light.....
    and read the last words i hope they can bring you comford


    bless you and peace to you sister...
    you maybe can imagine it on this moment but we all go trough the same things each and everybody in his own way..... let me give you a little feather of my wing and send you some love trough this poem
     
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    Thanks Liberty thats was really sweet..thanks for the love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt and i hear ya cry
    surely this pain u have and given
    will become lighter by faith
    and wisdom to let go
    why go through this hurt & pain
    ur so worthy of better ya cries
    will be heard and answered
    believe and make that change
    this so sad and heart felt ......feeling u
     
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    Thanks Rich for so much love and ur rite I dont need to go through that pain