Black Poetry : My Prayer

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  1. Poetic_Soul_23

    Poetic_Soul_23 Member MEMBER

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    Now I lay my head down to sleep....I pray to the Lord for me not to weep.... If I should cry or my heart should break....I pray to you Lord for someone to sooth my ache.... I pray for her pure at heart..... Make her funny, loyal and strong..... I guess that`s good for a start....As I lay on my pillow tears roll down my face.... I pray to you for love.... To fill this empty space.... And if I should die.... before I wake.... Tell her of me God.... and the greatest love I would have made.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...some prayer
    i am speechless but i do so understand
    for i pray the same
    Peace my friend
    Angel
     
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    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is thight
    out a sight
    prayer right
    I like it
    nice spit
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A prayer many have made, so tenderly phrased.
     
  5. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: Prayer

    Very lovely prayer.
     
  6. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good Job

    That poem was realli nice keep doin ur thang! U got my total support. :shades: :spinn:
     
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    greggy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow Poetic...many have prayed those very words but you put the vibe in it. Well done
     
  8. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh My Goodness...This Poem Was Booootiful....I almost shed a tear:wink:
    keep it goin poet :luv:
     
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