Black Poetry : My Poetry Ain't The Same

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Poetry ain’t the Same


    Poetic
    Listenin to the Floetic
    Sounds
    Of your time zone…
    But inside..
    It’s just a slow drone
    A buzz of bland emotions
    That Have no spirit anymore
    No Icons no galore
    No sadness
    Yet no glee
    No spirit to set free…
    It’s like I’m tamed to my
    Selfish provisions
    I think it’s because I
    Had a vision
    Of us merging into one
    I think that
    The burn out of my words
    Is all said and done
    Because without you here
    Around me
    Talking to me
    Flowing with me
    It seems that my words don’t make a dent
    I want sumone to feel them
    But
    My words just ain’t the same
    Because you are not here
    Giving me that aura that I need
    To press on…..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and so forth coming of the word
    i'm near to flow u from the curb

    dis was felt within i feel what say
    and i've taste the words from da pen
    deep down within da flow change

    let da drip continue and fine peace
     
  3. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey SwtT, :wave:

    WOW!! I really like this!! Beautiful flow, girl!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was beautifully scribed....
    being in tune with da senses is a wonderfull thing.....
    the only universal constant is change....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich, Play and Sierra.


    I appricate you guys so much :heart: :)
     
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    Yes, swtT sometimes is not easy having the "special inspiration" there. Feelin ya flow.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Angelic :heart:
     
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    hey SwtT
    this is so touching
    let the flow pour
    Peace
     
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    i know this feeling oh so well
    but in time your words won't be the same
    because they will be stronger...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Bluewater:heart:

    Thank you Khas :) I sure hope so :heart:
     
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