Black Poetry : My Pen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by uplift19, Mar 18, 2009.

  1. uplift19

    uplift19 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you gave a voice to my heart
    translating its beats
    into words with meaning
    a blank page has power unbounded
    and for that
    you are the reason
    you navigated the rough terrain
    of my youth
    revealed raw emotions
    too pure to be untrue
    fashioned my soul-drenched tears
    into a beautiful chalice
    embodied the expression
    of my thoughts
    and kept my life in balance
    I don't know why we fell apart
    I guess I just haven't had the time
    I always told my self
    my way back to you
    I would find
    but as I look behind me
    I barely recognize your face
    something got between us
    and our bond was erased
    I want to reconnect
    to find me in you again
    I wonder if that will happen one day
    I guess I just miss my pen
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes it will come together in a sweet release and new found bondship
    let da ink drip to canvas
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a bomb flow.
    You captured the discovery and the loss of true love so well.
     
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    uplift19 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope so, i'm a little rusty but i'm trying to get back in my groove...i just have been looking for inspiration
     
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    uplift19 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :qqb018: thanks...i was thinking about how i loss my love of writing and hopefully i will get it back
     
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    This is a nice write poet, sometimes if you just focus on the positive in the world, the pain that plagues the heart, and the desires that pushes the souls and hearts of man, you won't be able to put your pen down poet. Bless up and Love on! Love On! oh and welcome home!
     
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    There was a very long span in my life where I did not write. Lucky for us your creative ink is filling up that pen's chamber as we speak. I can relate poetess, great to read you again.
     
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    Your pen expresses itself well.

    Wish i'd a wrote it...

    PEACE
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uplift:
    I enjoyed this write very much as
    I have been experiencing a bit of writers block myself
    But I truly believe its just in us....as this
    wonderful write shows. Very nice indeed.

    Much Luv
     
  10. uplift19

    uplift19 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thx for the luv