Black Poetry : My Pen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Mar 11, 2004.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Breakin' free of your encasing.
    Like a dog jumpin' over a chained-link,
    Chasing sentences with complimentary expressions
    2 give the mental a clear view of an abstract image...
    Like lab rats swimmin' in a vat of hydrocholoric acid
    with snorkels in their mouths.
    The words flow from my mind 2 my fingers in a steady stream...
    I've already seen the pictures you're capable of sketching,
    The monumental towers of words U assist me in erecting...
    The lines of my pad are the mortar which holds in place
    the bricks of my pen's etchings.

    It's a blessing 2 affect people when they read my mind expressing
    vehemently against & 4 those topics that need addressing.
    Aggressively manifesting in the prose of soliloquy.
    My pen's capable of havin' souls feelin' me...
    So my minds gotta be strong & well equipped with
    solutions & facts.
    No pollution from crack or anything carried in paper sacks.
    I must keep my thinker intact.

    My ink helps prove that as fact.

    Without it, my mind's voice is flat.
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love your work...your expressions pull me into your world...

    hot scribe 4 sho!

    2fish
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    as always....

    My ink helps prove that as fact.
    Without it, my mind's voice is flat
    .

    like this line b/c for most
    the pen do the talking and speaks
    loud when we cant

    nice drop indeed
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like that pen is steered by a strong, sharp mind, enjoyed this.
     
  5. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Two, humbly I thank U 4 your words, it gives my mind peace.

    Angel, that's my favorite part, cuz as a Virgo, I'm kinda quiet, but my mind has much 2 say & composing pieces frees him of all the cluttered thoughts contained within. Thank U, my sister.

    My sister watz, the pen is definitely stronger than the sword when U decide that the mind is a terrible thing 2 waste. Thanx 4 the feel.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i'm lovin every moment of this here
    str8 tyte scribing
     
  7. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Positively strong and I enjoyed the freedom of thought in this piece.

    Q1
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your welcome....i understand how us virgos go
    this was a tight drop :angel1:

     
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    flowing on my brother
    the power of the pen
    feeling you for real
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I must admit this is the first time I checked out some of your work, but it will not be the last!!!!!! this is blazin'