Black Poetry : My pen wants to sing……

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My pen wants to sing
    Flow freely within the
    Wind on canvas
    Settin the perfect mood…
    The way it should…..
    My pen wants to sing
    Unto you as my heart bleeds….
    Within eyes its wrong
    As I have to fold
    And untold story
    Of sweet sweet love that lays….
    Heart callin
    soul needin
    being yearnin
    you taught my heart
    so much…..
    it was a empty shell
    now full of joy..but
    my pen just wants to sing…..
    But it cant….
    As the flow goes on….
    Why does this heart of mine
    Feel cut and ashame
    For the love it feels
    Peaceful lullaby
    As love breeze flow
    Up above high over
    the rainbow
    It glows in the orbs
    And thru the sands of time
    My pen wants to sing….
    Unto you a sweet lullaby
    Nothing of nothing
    Of a once upon a dream
    My heart cant seem to breath
    It no longer feels
    A dream of all dreams
    My pen wants to sing……

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was lovely and bittersweet!

    May God allow the muse to release your joy renew your faith and let you feel alive again!
    "With no shame for surviving for everything God does has purpose...to truly honor the loved ones gone we must live our lives fully! "BJS


    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    move forth and let it sing , ring freely openly
    as it move cross the page let it be felt
    i like dis here scribe
     
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    Your pen sang songs like a bird on a pearch
    it moved my soul like the choir in a church

    Your pen raised it's tunes
    like the sun at high noon

    it scooped me up in it's spoon
    and diped me into it croon

    Loved it angel!
    CP
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mz BlkAngel...

    this poem was absolutely beautiful...wonderful. It may be your best to date.

    :thanks: for sharing.

    :toast:
     
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    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem was deep. I can relate alot to it.
     
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    Sister....I love it!

    the whole concept...but that one line..."my pen wants to sing"
    says so much and speaks so loudly to my heart...

    love the way you flowed with this...

    Beautiful work!
     
  8. PositiveMindset

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    So nice...

    Let your pen sing loudly, cuz my mind is listening.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And yet your pen did sing a very heartfelt tune. Emotively brought piece here.
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the love watz thanks for being it back...i had forgot about this one...Peace Angel
     
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