Black Poetry : My pen runs dry

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking backwards
    But moving frontwards….
    My pen runs dry
    Full speed ahead…
    Hittin a wall each time…..
    Broken sentence
    Lost words…..
    Following them around
    Tryin to catch a thought….
    To make a flow…
    Shakin my head…
    Its like a bad dream
    As I begin to scream
    My pen runs dry
    Movin in slow motion
    tryin to
    Catch it from the start
    But it already ended…as it slips
    ………..away
    Like I dip in a coma….and lost my
    Senses……
    Mind spinnin hand twisitin
    Just wanna grip…..my pen
    As the ink flows………but
    My pen just dry….no ink
    i think imma gonna cry
    No lines cant even find the start
    Paper blank…..oh where did it all go????
    For I lost it in a blink of an eye

    a blkangel thang​
     
  2. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some of the best pieces tend to be about writer's block. An oxymoron of sorts, I guess. But this is a great piece here.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know thas right!! this was nice sista...i dont believe you :lol:
    writers block??? come on now...YOU???
    :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime master piece come from
    mental blocks but inside u fine it
    smooth crafted art .....continue on
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brilliantly captured, sis. I feel u
     
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    I feel where you're coming from
    but it seems your ink has begun
    to flo'

    let it flo' sistah! :)


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish I could write something like that when I was in a "writters block"! I love it.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Did your pen run dry?

    Or, did your thoughts run out?

    Or, did your emotions and feelings dry up?

    The imagery in this piece was off da HOOOOOOK....:D

    Hey, lady...you know I :love: your work.

    Keep it coming.

    :toast:
     
  9. watzinaname

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    Your pen will never really run dry...deep thoughts here, flow on....
     
  10. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It seems as though every writer should feel you on this peice; very nicely expresses
    As always, thanks for sharing
     
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