Black Poetry : "my pen" (one for the tourists)

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my pen
    breaks my soul down in fragments
    my ink is never stagnant like the pacific... thoughts prolific
    encompassing body-mind
    the seven seas will dry before my ink will- designed to spill
    pure oil into your rivers
    mountains shiver
    my pen
    structural ancient
    no attraction for tourists exploring for the purest...
    first and last of the seven wonders
    elevated thoughts
    high enough to put heaven under
    my pen get personal
    . convicts me of my sin
    . undergoes double edge sword transformations
    . will judge the nations with poetic wrath
    . is a container of my math degree
    my pen
    . aligned with the Orion and gave light
    and gave poets a sight to behold
    as it paved their streets with wisdom and gold
    my pen speaks bold to peeps
    either in the name of love and war
    it used to have words like "**** you" for those disrespecting
    my land mass
    l stand fast to its changes and different colors
    part lover and ruler
    a student to poetic others whose structures are remote yet seenmy pen
    is a curse to evil cops and politics
    exceeding the obvious
    . not your average politician
    . hates all the U.N
    and loved by a few men but respected by all...
    refilled at God's call
    and saw the near fall of the pyramids- to much break and enter
    my pen has now become the center........
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mad flow mad science!
    keep droppin' 'em j'hiah!
    Do tha thang!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man yo pen !!
    that pen
    mighty ...........
     
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    sxe_poetress New Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow! Very nice...


    One Luv, One Aim, One Destiny
     
  5. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's one very nice flow here. I especially like this:

    "my pen get personal
    . convicts me of my sin
    . undergoes double edge sword transformations
    . will judge the nations with poetic wrath
    . is a container of my math degree"

    Tight work!

    Serenity...
    She
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx.

    poetress and She, got my eyes on your flowz...

    nfinite....
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *touring*
     
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    My fountain pen
    is my syringe
    taking from veins
    to write the pangs in my own blood,
    ink aint thick enough to tell the stories of a soul.
    I may be an abuser of trees or papyrus leaves
    Emotionally sieved
    bleed
    my thoughts on to the pages of books
    contorting emotions into poetic hooks
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow!!

    "ink aint thick enough to tell the stories of a soul.."

    a poet's proverb :toast:
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "ink aint thick enough to tell the stories of a soul.." can i get this on a t-shirt?????????????
     
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