Quiet Poetry Lounge : My pen-is

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THA HOOKUPMAN, Sep 2, 2004.

  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    DO me a favour
    Gimme me some of YO paper
    Cuz
    My pen-is
    Yearning to scribble
    So badddddd
    The ink's starting to trickle
    little by little from its tip

    Be careful now how you handle it

    Cuz
    My pen-is
    Slick and very thick
    Penning love poems can give carpal tunnel syndromes in wristbones
    So try to grip it
    Effectively
    Firmly
    Confident to make bold strokes
    Up and Down
    Taking notes?
    Down and Up
    Now put
    It on to yo paper :uzi:

    Awww now that's much better
    I can feel ur paper's
    getting wetter and wetter and wetter
    Letters twist in cursive
    A thought bubble bursts
    Words release Verses
    Capture the urge to merge
    Into the sentences thirst is
    imprisoned for ages within our minds
    Penned on pages since the begginning of time
    Come on baby let us make lines
    To remember.

    My pen-is
    9 "
    Black
    Comely
    Lovely
    Rigid
    Firm
    Throbbing
    Pulsating
    Creating
    Making you think of pre-positions
    Like
    Above
    Behind
    Below
    Beneath
    Beside
    Betwixt
    Between
    Beyond any of your wildest dreams
    My pen-is
    Making you scream
    as it traces your wide paragraph aass
    moving along the margin
    The reddddd wuhn making you gaspppp
    For oxygen.

    My pen-is
    The Bomb
    Gripped in mah palm
    Merciless at its thirstiest
    Sorta like Ghenkis Khan
    Bloodthirtsy
    Ruthless
    Nefarious
    Mean
    Vicious
    Malicious
    Savage
    Ravenous
    To mid-sections
    In(ter)jections
    Causing
    AH
    HMM
    HI
    HELLO
    DEAR
    ALAS
    ER
    UMMMM
    UH HUH
    HEY
    OUCH
    OH
    Goodness
    then it starts to
    Spout
    Spew
    Erupt
    Eject
    Expel
    N U can tell
    My pen-is
    Now
    submerged deep in your ink well

    hookupman president of the lyndon street poets

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  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: And I thought I had issues...LOL :laugh:
    I loved this flow my brother... Dap'z! :spin:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol............u got some wild oaks to solve
    dis was str8 tyte and wild u do have issuesssssssssssssssssssss!!!

    hahahahahahaha !
    dis was funny
     
  4. angelicsage

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    Oh my gaaaaawd...
    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:

    ...one word

    ~ Phenomenal ~​



    00000000000000000
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You got that off brother ....decently so "smh" I must admit...it's an originial :laugh: :lol: and a fun read, thanks for the chuckle
     
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    Explicitly poeticly sensuous. Such a craftsman at work. Wow.....I'll never look at paper quite the same....
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] :huh: I share your thoughts... :laugh:
     
  8. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    thanks for the hugs yawl :blush:
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaay Brother Hookup :wave:

    Yo' Pen Is Awesome !!!!

    Keep It Forever Flowing !!!!

    Whew !!!! :toast:

    :heart:

    Destee