Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Mar 3, 2002.
This is my passion
To cast poems into God's breath...
Let Him breathe on you.
hearing you breathe life
dry bones have now been revived
i have my being
as usual you're great,
Sistah gurl I'm ova here sniffin' it all in... this is (of course) splendid!
AMAZING HOW SHORT THAT WAS THAT JUST SLP ME IN THE FACE LEFT ME BREATHLESS FOR REAL GIRL
woooo...joyce, that's beautiful! thank you for this heyah, dear poetess. very well.
da touch of thou God
forth given life within he
so one may have breath
dis here captured me within deeply...................
J'hiah: Thanks for the haiku reply...I likes it.
N2ursoul: Glad I go into YOUR soul.
Listerscribin: Thanks for showing yo luv. You know
I appreciates it.
Rich: Your haiku reply is a righteous thang! Thank you.
MaddRapper: I hope you got your breath breath back
cuz I'm gonna try and take it again.
Thanks for reading me.
I don't know if I should use the word "hell" in my description of this particular piece, but for lack of a better word at the moment...
this was good as hell to me.
Better than hell, wouldn't you think?
Thanks for the read Ms. Berry. Glad you enjoyed.
Ya sista in poetry...Joyce
Whoa! Joyce, what profound thoughts U present, in so little words. I am really taking deep breaths here to breathe U in and hear your soul whispering in the wind, and speaking in the valley. You move me with your words.
God bless U constantly and immensely.
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