Black Poetry : My Passion

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Mar 3, 2002.

  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is my passion
    To cast poems into God's breath...
    Let Him breathe on you.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hearing you breathe life
    dry bones have now been revived
    i have my being

    as usual you're great,
    jh.
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sistah gurl I'm ova here sniffin' it all in... this is (of course) splendid! :)

    N2 :D
     
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    AMAZING HOW SHORT THAT WAS THAT JUST SLP ME IN THE FACE LEFT ME BREATHLESS FOR REAL GIRL
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woooo...joyce, that's beautiful! thank you for this heyah, dear poetess. very well.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da touch of thou God
    forth given life within he
    so one may have breath

    dis here captured me within deeply...................
     
  7. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J'hiah: Thanks for the haiku reply...I likes it.

    N2ursoul: Glad I go into YOUR soul.

    Listerscribin: Thanks for showing yo luv. You know
    I appreciates it.
    Rich: Your haiku reply is a righteous thang! Thank you.

    MaddRapper: :) I hope you got your breath breath back
    cuz I'm gonna try and take it again.
    Thanks for reading me.
     
  8. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't know if I should use the word "hell" in my description of this particular piece, but for lack of a better word at the moment...
    this was good as hell to me.

    Wonderful work.
     
  9. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: Better than hell, wouldn't you think?
    Thanks for the read Ms. Berry. Glad you enjoyed.

    Ya sista in poetry...Joyce
     
  10. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...>floats in>

    Whoa! Joyce, what profound thoughts U present, in so little words. I am really taking deep breaths here to breathe U in and hear your soul whispering in the wind, and speaking in the valley. You move me with your words.
    Thanks Poetess!
    God bless U constantly and immensely.

    <floats out<...
     
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